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Save Me- Soulker/LSG Ft. Alkima

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We understand. We've got your back.


In retrospect, I wish I had played Player One's verse before mine. He really killed it on this track. However, that was not the initial design of the track and the recent demise of my most recent laptop has rendered editing completely impossible. Listen to his verse. Its so good.

Save Me was written on April 13th, my birthday.

[Lyrics]

[Vocal Intro]

[Chorus]

Ooh

Can you save me?

Welcome to my life

This is a live reaction replay

Ooh

It's my worst day

Nothing left inside

I wanna try, but I disintegrate

[Verse, Aegimus]

I don't know

If I can do this

Give me something

To remove this

Escalating misconstruence

I'm just asking for influence

[Breath]

And I don't know

Where the bridge was built

Or when the water's gonna

Overflow

I feel so low

Give me something I can feel

So it can be tomorrow

[Chorus]

[Verse, Player 1]

Built on sand my castle

always crumbles when there's hassle

I've built it up and knocked it down

a hundred times before

so i search for solid ground

so i dont have to cry no more

but,

there's always something new

conditions that arise

and everytime i feel more dead inside

it's really not suprising,

gloomy is the word

my souls a graveyard in the making

and these tombstones are my failures

from which there's no escaping

and there's another one

it makes the land look like

it's been forsaken by the sun

and every creature lies within is my creations

and they all connect to me just like a horrid constellation

the sun begins to rise

cannot help but despise

all the platitiudes

you've ever said to me

have all been lies

so i'll retreat for now

but ill be coming back

you can't abate the hellish monkey

that rests on your back

[Chorus]

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i really think the main problem with this isn't the vocals per se but just the... intonation of them. some of the pitches with the sung "chords" make you cringe, and when there are two voices at once (which might be a little too stereo separated for my taste), they are too different to make it as enjoyable as possible. lastly, i don't think that the vocals are mixed well with the instrumental, which i really like, actually.
other than that no real complaints.

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thank you for your input.

EDIT: This song is mixed as it is because of the low amount of equipment and software available at the time. If I could make one wish regarding this song, it would be that people ignore the quality and the minor things, and listen to the words.

It was originally written on my birthday. "Ohhh can you save me" used to be "Ohhh happy birthday" actually, but we deemed THAT too cringe and I rewrote it.

If you couldn't enjoy it, I hope that future peoples can, thanks to this exchange.

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Score
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Uploaded
May 31, 2019
10:51 PM EDT
Genre
Music
File Info
Song
4 MB
2 min 57 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

* Contains third-party samples.
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