Woah, this is amazing.
hope you like it , it's my first time posting in Newgrounds, let me know if there is something wrong
Woah, this is amazing.
A very engaging intro, I would have maybe drawn it out a little longer. And that lead that comes in, while awesome, may have come in too early as well. The percussion is solid. Your accompanying synths that back up your lead could stand to be a little louder because they are beautiful. Very nice. This reminds me of a Deus Ex track in some ways. It kinda loses me there for awhile during the 2-3 minute mark. It's not bad but it doesn't evolve into anything else. And it ends a little too abruptly. All in all it is a good track and I enjoy it. I would just make people savor it more by adding a little more time for it to establish itself. Give it some ambiance and if you're going to end it, end it with a bang. Nice work though!
I like the atmosphere at the beginning. The piece sounds a tad ominous, even apprehensive even. The texture is well-balanced, and I like the melodic content at :21. The drums weren’t always as strong in the mix as I wanted them to be. Perhaps some more compression or reverb removal from the synths could help there. Amidst the rather steadfast instrumental palette of this piece, I really enjoyed the cute melodic flair at 1:12. That said, I think the main compositional component this piece is missing is some sort of breakdown or bridge for the purpose of adding shape and structural contrast to the texture. Right now, the drum fills and instrumental hierarchy both get old, and this piece is long enough that it needs some sort of re-introduction or solo to refocus the major motifs of this piece and allow more opportunities for melodic development. A one-directional piece like this makes it a lot harder to accomplish that. Still, that may seem a bit nit-picky. The production, sound design, melodic content, and atmosphere are all excellent here. Keep up the good work, Rebricked! ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
8.25/10
Loving the beat. The beginning coming in was amazing. Felt like I was watching Stranger Things.
Thanks!
It is the good. The good is this. (wtf am I saying?)
I like it! I think you have a talent for song making, especially considering this is your first song (or at least your first Newgrounds song.)
Thanks! this is actually the most recent song i made, glad you liked it!
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