You've certainly nailed the dark electro genre with a synthwave feel, I like it when people create hybrids of genres and go out of their comfort zone. There's quite a bit of contrast with instruments at the start, but I don't find the lead that fitting for this genre. Work on your transitions a bit at 0:42, maybe a little snare roll or reversed white noise. After that, the drums feel a little weird to be in the music, maybe pitch them down so it can fit the general dark style you was going for. I like 1:36-1:49, again a little nice break. The lead transition was ok, but very empty. After that, we have the very slightly unfitting lead and drums again. Maybe replace the lead with a bit of acid. At 2:28, I can hear a Love Philter preset. Nice to see that people still use Love Philter, but don't just use stock presets. 2:46-3:00 is a slightly noisy transition, which you should maybe fix. 3:01-3:38 is again slightly unfitting, but I can get behind it with a good atmosphere.
Overall, quite a bit of instruments you should adjust to dark techno standards, pretty good ambience again and mediocre transitions. 7/10