I think you're on the right track here, the production is pretty clean so good job with that :) though I think you need to work on some things. Your melodic sections are really empty, some bass, a moving rhythm, and some chords in the background could really help you out a lot. The drops sound pretty good but I think you're using that roaring bass WAYYY too much. It doesn't really help that it's a pretty static sound, and that it's just playing quarter notes. I'd really consider taking the extra step to design sounds with a lot of movement, as well as creating more interesting drop rhythms. Other than that though this is cool!

Sounds nice :D & cool deathstep drop

Chilling and cool beat!

so cool~