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Your World Is Unraveling

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So I had a friend ask me to come up with a theme for their sci-fi/video game themed audio drama but then the project got dumped so I just turned a theme into a whole soundtrack demo

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This is so good. The build. The qualify. The way the sounds waver and rake you in... calm, creative and yet just brimming with energy all the way. The orchestral bits add so much too! This is awesome.

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Sounds pretty good. I would make the volume levels a bit more consistent though, you can still have variations but maybe not so sharp ones? Composition and instrumentation is great 5/5 on that. I like the electronic orchestra going on. It's a very original idea, has not been done before.

Mixing/Mastering: 5/5
Melody: 5/5
Effects: 4/5 (The part at 50 seconds, when the volume picks up, could be a bit more immersive is the only reason I am not rating it a 5/5.)

This is so cool dude! Your fusion of orchestra and electronica works really well together with this one. Reminds me a lot of BT :)

I like the dramatic swell at the beginning. The swell, ticking in the background, and synth on the off-beats combined to give the atmosphere a bit of an ominous feel, so I was surprised when the descending arpeggios at :05 sounded so blissful and cathartic. There’s a good sense of climax into :51, although I think you could’ve used more treble tones in the texture there. The percussion was creative, although I wish the snare was a bit louder and punchier in the mix. In fact, the mix as a whole is pretty quiet, despite the unique sound design and flowing composition. Later in the piece, the strings add a new dimension of wonder, and also lead the climax into 2:09. I think the piece could’ve had some more dynamic melodic content, and the structure could’ve been fleshed out more, but overall you nailed the atmosphere, mood, sound design, and progression. Keep at it, Vocaloutburst! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8/10

vocaloutburst responds:

Thanks a ton for the feedback! This track was made before I got mixing and mastering tools and I also got a better laptop as well, probably gonna remix the whole thing soon. Really glad you enjoyed it!

I love beginning of this track! It is very awesome and unique.
But for my taste second part of track is less impressive. I like whole idea and melody, but I dont really like drum samples (sounds to cheap)

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Downloads
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Score
4.77 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 8, 2019
6:03 PM EDT
Genre
Video Game
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
2 min 50 sec

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