I made an ambient song about riding a train too! :D It's far more dark than this stuff tho
Sounded more chill song when it started, with these funky drums, but that ambient influence with liquid sounding synth hit is really the only thing I see that ambient with it. And maybe those effected drums too
Anyways the rest of the drums seem pretty good, but soo tiny and hollow- I guess that does something you wanted with the track
Bells seems tiny too, way low in the mix
Nice job man (no wait, you're not one), ANYWAYS, could need some minor improvements and additions, then you'd have a great ambient-ISH track.
holy poop, how many ambient train tracks are there (on newgrounds)?! anyways, i can clearly feel the 'train' in this track- the beat reminds of the sound a train makes, and the one-two bell clearly resembles the symmetry of the train sound (correct me if i'm wrong). one of my older ambient train tracks was also based on this idea of making a train-ish beat. anyways, the track is ok for ambient. i'll five it, knowing you're a beginner and all (correct me if i'm wrong). keep up it up now.
Thanks man. I actually only know 2 train songs on newgrounds in the genre Ambient. Oh well. And yes, I am a beginner. I just started making music sence christmas.
A bit repetative but still good. Not too sure about the bells or bell sounds throughout the track. Not very train like really but everything else suits it.
It does portray a train but it's not really a slow train. The cymbal at the end was not really needed as it faded out by the time you put it in, maybe consider about taking it out.
Did you happen to take the idea out of my track 'Slow train' by any chance? (i'm not too bothered if you did!)
- Good Job -
Yes! I liked that track. It's one of my favorites of yours. Thanks for the review!