That tick at 0:13 is weird. So weird that idk if you even did that on purpose

The kick that come in at 0:27 is a little too overpowering. I'd have it slowly crescendo

At 0:34, I'd add another element to the song: Either another drum or counter melody

Second Piano strike sound off at 0:44. Try to make it so there's no "lull" before the second hit (as in it should transition right into it)

Drums at 0:58 are WAY too loud. Again like before, make it take longer to crescendo. Also, add other elements. It's supposed to be the lead up to the drop. I do like the piano solo at 1:03 tho

For the whole section at 1:04, everything is too loud. Try to re balance stuff so you can hear everything

The Piano that comes in at 1:48 is really weird. Maybe make it so there's no effect on it and/or make it a counter melody. The chords are also not matched with what you had going before

At 1:58 on, just re balance the volume again. The Kick and Snare immediately after are very loud

The crash at 2:56 is a yikes lmao