nice

epic

Cute instruments and catchy drums. There’s this synth drone in the background for a lot of the first half of the piece that I thought was a bit obnoxious. That and a couple of the other instruments in here sound a tad unpolished, and the texture is also pretty minimal. The harmonic content doesn’t have much variety, and I think the structure can be much more fleshed-out. I also wanted to see you use more advanced ways of creating variation besides just adding and subtracting instruments over time. Phrasing, dynamic contrast, filtering, automation, and other techniques are much more advanced. Overall, though, my main problem with the piece is the lack of compositional completeness. Still, this has a cute mood, crisp mix, and pretty catchy rhythmic content. Keep at it, OiPriPri! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
5.75/10