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Pretty cool, I think you've definitely got a great overall grasp on mixing.
My advice would be that you need to pace your music a bit better (it takes a bit too long to progress and get exciting) and have some changes happen before it gets repetitive, by adding some more melodic stuff over your bass and chords for example. I do think the bass and guitar parts are well done, and the drums are particularly impressive. Keep it up!

Time for some constructive feedback.

The entire track feels fairly empty. Something of a background pad or arpeggio would have helped fill it nicely.
I feel like the heavily reverberated percussion could have been quieter. Even so, percussion is on point. Nicely done.
I think the biggest problem this track has is lack of variation. Though the mixing is actually quite nice (take this with a grain of salt though, as that may just be due tot he fact that there aren't many elements to mix), the track stays quite monotonous throughout. It's the same percussion loop, the same bass sounds, the same guitar (except for 2:25, which was a nice change, though it ends very abruptly). On top of that, the track lacks anything resembling a drop, or, alternatively, is there is one, it's severely lacking power and impact as I was not able to distinguish it from the regular verses.
All in all, it's not bad, but it could have been better. Still, as I said, the mix is quite good, so you show some potential. Just work on your ideas a bit, and I'm sure you'll become an excellent musician. :)

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