sounds good nice flow. i like a few things about it but it doesnt stir me much mostly just a great composition. so from me 9/10 keep up the good work. try adding some strings or maybe i dunno something else to convey the message a bit better. Ive heard some background strings take a piano solo piece to a whole new level. Base could could be cool as well but that really would only fit in with a sad song which, this really isnt so nevermind lol. kk good job .
ps: sorry it took me so long to continue to review your stuff but i had some issues i need to take care of here but im back so.. ill get the ball rolling again