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A Dream Where My Teeth Fall Out

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My first attempt singing in any of my own songs. I'm really proud of this one, I would love it if you left a review!

Lyrics:
Say what I need to want, I don’t want to want what I
Don’t need, in my dreams I don’t need a thing but I
Can’t seem to release what I want to think about
That’s why I love that dream where my teeth fall out

I understand that you don’t know where to go
When to show you’re in slow motion
It’s bad day when you find a new way
To prevent your teeth from falling out

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I like the atmosphere at the beginning and the melodic content. The vocals at :18 are really smooth, but the mixing effects on them are a bit heavy, to the point that I have trouble making out the lyrics. Part of the problem might be the synth arpeggios that play along with the vocals, but either way that’s a relatively small detail. The funky synth at 1:10 is awesome, and I love how you fill the texture mostly with the atmospheric content here. The vocals and melodies really keep things engaging, and the sound design is strong as well. I think you could’ve done a bit more with the drums, though - they seemed to be a pretty straight kick-snare-kick-snare for most of the piece. I also would’ve liked to hear a little more variation on the vocal phrases. Still, the quirky instruments, atmosphere, and mood of this one are really cool. I’d love to see the lyrics, too, if I could bother you to put them in the author’s description. :) Strong work overall, Drewpy! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
9.25/10

Drewpy responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback! I added lyrics in the description :D

Forgot to leave a review here (left a comment on youtube tho).
Love this. Super clear mix too.

Drewpy responds:

Thanks dude :D

Sounds like Instant Crush by Daft Punk. This song is very nice!

Drewpy responds:

Whoa thank you very much!

very good! amazing songs.

Drewpy responds:

I appreciate it haha

Credits & Info

Drewpy
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Listens
605
Faves:
5
Downloads
11
Votes
8
Score
4.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 12, 2019
2:51 PM EDT
Genre
Synthwave
File Info
Song
5.1 MB
3 min 43 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.