Not bad.

I got my own hip hop studio, so I figured I might have some say in this biz. The track was okay. It needs some mixing. I think the shaker was the loudest part. The lil synth that starts in the begining was cool, a lil bit of funk.

The drums themselves were programmed nicely, has a good step to it. But then you kill em off in another breakdown. :\ Feels very latino there.

The bassline has a hustler feel to it, maybe a little bit of a beach vibe; not sure. The track as a whole seems incomplete. Maybe work on a focused hook part, I dunno. I think someone could do a decent song rapping over this.

Keep it wildstyle!
JAG

yo

sorry i took so long to review this

yeh its hot, i like it, good to chill out to

i dunno, try addin sum strings cuz it cud b sum crazy shit

ill fuk around wiv it if ya want, jus hit me up on aim iight

peace ~187~

it was more R&B

it was good i liked it but it was more R&B then anything. i dont realy know what you coulda done better, mabe some diffrent effects.