Hello again! J DIlla is truly a great beatmaker, i loved to listen to him.

What can I say about the track, good beat parts, especially whipping to the transition, but there is no motive, melody, which would be accompanied by a continuous beats, where at the end there would be a beautiful transition from one whipping to another.

There is also too much bass in this synth, it would be good to reduce it, because heard overload :(

Try, listen and listen to what Dilla himself was doing, and most importantly, invest your soul, do not be afraid to spend more time on the track! I believe in you, you will definitely succeed! (Sorry if something could hurt you, sincerely wish you success!)