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thelane & Øneheart - Sunset

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Condensed future bass wireframe with instrumentation as thick as spray paint. Percussion is clear, yet even thinner than the saws overpowering it. If the saws fidgeted/got swept around with any rhythmic complexity/had sharp slices taken out/dissolved/etc. vs. just sidechaining and an LFO, I'd get the impression that the instrumentation is meant to be as minimalistic as it is, but as it stands, it's not effectively communicating that to me. The only thing that suggests this is anything but the most basic attempt at replicating a formula is the fact that it's filed under "Experimental".

… I'm really struggling to find constructive feedback because there's so little to work with. There's just percussion, chords, and an arp. Not much in the way of compositional detail, or melodic interplay between instruments, or any complexity anywhere. I can't tell if you even have anything to say with music like this. And this was a two-man effort? … All I can say is I think you've got a decent enough handle on mix clarity to get a little more daring with layering.

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Listens
307
Votes
7
Score
3.02 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 19, 2019
11:12 AM EST
Genre
Experimental
File Info
Song
5.9 MB
2 min 34 sec

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