Relatively good

This was very good quality, however it lacked substance in some areas. Many times it was almost seemingly random notes. Too many notes is one thing, but these notes were far, far too sparse. Try putting in a more solid and evolving melody next time. Almost the entirety of the beginning of the song is just drums. Drums are nice, and they were very well done, but it seemed excessive when you had barely 3 notes on top of them for almost 1/5 of the time.

But other than that, is it an amazingly good effort at a song, definately keep going at it. The difference between nice sounding songs and really good songs are good melodies and good chord progressions. Try mixing some minor and major chords - those always turn out sounding cool, when they are done right.

One last thing - All the voices were very well done, except the one at the end, which was rather annoying and screechy.

Good

very nice song. I like the melodies.. but the song's quality is sorta not good.. it distortes in areas.. but othereise its awesome..

voted 9

Originality 9: Many people put some random music into the trance section. But this, is PERFECT for trance.
Clarity 9: I would have liked the bass to be louder. .. There was also that flute (I'm guessing) that kinda threw off the song, but it bounced back.
Diversity 8: Not too many different sounds.
Effort 9: Really nice job.
OVERALL 9
Amazing job with this. I think you could have build up be faster. The song took a while until I really got into it. When I did, however, the song was really great! Keep up the good work, and make more like this!!
9/10
4/5