Nice voiceover, though while it is good and I liked it, it just doesn't quite hit those sweet spots for me premise wise, but it's *real* close. I'd rather the man vent his frustrations through being dominant, "forcing" himself onto her (she actually loves when he does this, just pretends to not like it to really rile him up), pulling her into the bedroom, holding her down and kissing her, groping her, fondling her, spanking her, generally having his way with her. Basically a variant of this VO where the roles are slightly reversed.