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R4in - ⌖Rite of passage⌖

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⌖ I changed the style a bit, I hope you like it. ⌖
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At the end you feel a little discomfort and track somehow ends abruptly. But nice

i kinda dont like stock samples but hey, really gets me the dark atmo feel.

Dunno why but the track name made me think of hiphop. Listening on the train so not gonna comment on mixing.

Track starts off well. The disonant bells at 34 are decent. Your snare is well placed. Tidy and clean beat. Then we got a breakdown at 50 seconds, nice and slow build up, you're brave! 1:15 I'm sat here wondering what kinda drop we'll have. 1:30 that wobble comes in too unexpectedly dude.

The track so far feels like its building to something but 2 min 18 in and there has not quite been a dubstep drop.

Your builds are nice but you need a heavy drop dude.

E.g. 3:10 sounds like you're building into a drop. Take that section, throw in some rising sweeps, maybe some snare rolls, hi hat rolls, then chuck it into a drop.

For the drop, do whatever you like. Some ideas could be a heavy growly style noise, you could do a sinewave style wobble, you could side chain some synth with heavy chord bits, a lot of potential there.

So all in all, a decent track, you got all the non-drop bits spot on, just add a heavy drop in there and you are golden.

Hope it helps dude

Peace

CryptVoice responds:

Thank you i will take it

Praise the devil!

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Score
4.02 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 29, 2019
1:21 AM EST
Genre
Dubstep
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Song
5.7 MB
4 min 8 sec

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