((VOTED 4))
Well this seamed more like you were just experimenting then actually making a song. It was actually pretty okay. Lots of variety in terms of noises and instruments. And they all seamed to sync together well to make a very smooth song. Your definantly on the track to being a great artist.
The only real bad things about this were, for one, needed better quality. It seamed to get really scratchy at parts. And just to put in more stuff because for the most part this seamed pretty bland and uninteresting. Try and make the beat a little faster. Just try and be different with you song and people will definantly like it. Good job.