Actually enjoyed the dissonance. Big fan of electric guitar type sounds, so this was perfect.

Not quite there yet.

Whatever the main instrument you used is, it is terrible. Dissonant to the point of being painful to listen to. I can't really enjoy listening to the rest of the music because it's really that bad. Unfortunately the rest of the music seems to be pretty good. Change the main track to something a bit more...well a lot less harsh.