I liked it. It sounded bad at first... but then went at a good pace. Try to make it have a beat though and not just a jumbled mess of sounds!
Kinda like an alarm going off at first, and then it messes up or something. This is like a psychotic adventure to me. I'm going through all sorts of things like classic broadcasts of a fallout or that I'm in space floating around motionless. You may find this odd, yet it is what I see while listening to this song.
Really great ambient, overall. I don't see much room for improvement.. you've already got the thing in the clear.