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Hi there,

Great intro! I love the plucky chords. The hi-hats a bit too loud... The drums don't really stand out in the intro, up that volume haha.

The drop reminds me of the witcher 3, I don't know why.... I like the vibe you're going for. You need to work on your mix, it sounds really "flat".

1:43 woooow, that chord is out of scale :( please fix it.
The 2nd drop sounds exactly the same as the first one. Please add a variation ;)

Conclusion:
Make sure the drums "pop out" of your mix. The composition is great, it's not repetitive at all. Everything is in key, except for the 3rd chord in the breakdown.

Keep producing!

~Simon

Svenzo responds:

I checked that chord in Fl Studio and seems i had it on the wrong note somehow,guess i overlooked that.Fixed it now tho.

Yeh might be a bit repetetive but thats always the prob in my songs

Thanks for the review

Im in love with this track allready^^

Svenzo responds:

Thanks! I'm glad to hear it

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3 min 4 sec
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