You're rushing way too quickly especially towards the beginning. The point of narration is to get your point across in a compelling way. In some areas, you're behaving more like it's a character reel. It's a little too long for a real *reel*, you should aspire for it to be 60 seconds or under. However, you emote well and I see a lot of potential.
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Here's a collection of short narrations of different genres, giving a full showcase of what sort of stories my voice can fit. Enjoy!
WalliumVA responds:
I appreciate the feedback! This is the first time i've ever really done a narration reel, I expected this to have pacing flaws but I just wasn't sure where XD In future, I shall endeavour to make my recordings not too rushed in order to establish a better pace, and cut down on the time.
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