It's ok. Not much to it

so thats it some drums

i don't even like my music but yours is DAH!!!
your a frutiy loops user a lot of people can tell that your new to it

1...um...line?

Okay, so you used the rice sound again, that's fine. It didn't bug me as much on the last song as it does on this one though. This one seems fairly repetative, and I didn't really like it as much. That's just my opinion though so doesn't mean it's not good music... just means it's not my kind of music. It's obvious though that you tried something different with this, so I give you credit there. I hope you don't go and change anything based on my opinion, I'll continue to check out your stuff regardless. Keep it up.

Carpunch