Very nice

Wow this was "AWSOME" it starts off slow and has a sort of "BUILD-UP" I do think that build up could be more dominant and push harder but you have a nice sound here and I really enjoyed it, These kind of tracks always have a good touch and feel to them, they are decent, and in some cases kind of differant but thats what I like about them, so what I have to say is that i was pleased with what you came up with, keep that kind of style up. This had a snse of Charm to it, You have some very good talent and this is just a glimpse into your world. you show us the passion of the song and make it your own style.

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I do think that build up could be more dominant and push harder but you have a nice sound here and I really enjoyed it

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