I have to agree this is making me sleepy hehe..
the melody is better than your other ones though, although you are still repeating a lot of the same notes - you got some nice chords in there though. You are slooowly getting better hehehe
good job man
You're really making me sleepy there.
Nice work, I'd recommend you to add more instruments though, perhaps some strings, or tasty percussions on top.
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