I'm glad you're listening to my criticisms of your various tracks. Keep that up and you should go far! :) Hahaha
Awesome track and may the fleas from a thousand camels infest the armpits of anyone who says otherwise!
Gotta agree with AzNpHoEnIx
Good calming track with mixing issues. Everything's at the center (or too close to the center); try panning (or panning more). It'll give a clearer definition of every instrument.
There some balance issues on the bass guitar and the rhythm section. Sometimes it sounds like the bass guitar is fighting over the snare drums and the acoustic guitar. And other times the snare is little over the bass guitar.
This was just an experiment, really. Maybe I shouldn't have submitted it.. but I thought it was "Just" good enough to squeeze in.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.