The song is not bad but could use a lot of work. Seeing as you tagged it 'lofi' and set the genre to 'hip hop' i'm guessing you were going for lofi hiphop, or commonly mixed / interpreted as chillhop. if you infact were, this is not it. neither is it lofi. i'm missing elements like extremely soft sounds, fast beats, vinyl hum etc. overall not bad, however the drum choice is kinda... eh. instrument choice is too. however much it sounds a bit lofi, it can still be interpreted as a hifi song contradictory to the description of the song. anyways. 6/10 i'd say due to how repetitive is, has almost no melodic parts, etc. maybe take a listen to some more lofi music and get a taste of how the imperfections work, but you're on a great start and seems like your songs are pretty good. if you want to try alternative lofi I suggest going in a similar direction like katuchat? :)
I like this track. It has inspired me to do an animation that would fit this sound.
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