Notbad
it has a slow start but is pretty good, maybe make it speed up faster and faster build up, So with all that mentioned above I will say to end this out that I was pretty impressed with this and do hope you make more stuff like this one as it was pretty well presented, An impressive tune if you ask me it was different and I liked what you made here today, and Hope to checkout more of your style and vibe, because this one here was just brilliant and fantastic love the sound quality.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe make it speed up faster and faster build up
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