I think it’s a decent track, but aside from the central melody, there really isn’t anything going on harmonically. Buildups need more energy, or a fill or smth. Don’t really like the drum samples. Some synths I’m not a fan of, mostly because they don’t go well with the melody, which contrasts in terms of mood.

Overall, this track would work better if you
Changed the mood a bit. Seems a bit chill, the melody would go well with a positive tone.

Keep at it Ed ;) (my tracks are pretty trash as well give me some feedbake)