Hi! I'll leave some thoughts/feedback here on your song. I'll do it the best I can :)

I like the plucks in the intro, the melodies sound very nice. The vocal chops sound good too, but I would be more careful with the high frequencies.

The transition to the drop was kinda weird. The build up was too short, and that extra step right before it was weird too (I don't like when people do that, just personal taste I guess). I would slowly fade out some sounds like the bass and the chords to make the drop hit harder.

Then, the drop itself. The kick seems to be distorting a lot in the mix, and everything is too loud. Watch out for the levels in the mix, every sound needs its own space. The main lead sounds too simple, and the snare that comes in later is too weak.

The pluck synth that comes in after the drop sounds very good too, but again, be careful with the high frequencies.

The vocals at the end surprised me, I really liked the way the song ended with an inconcluse melody.

That's it! Good stuff, just needs more work in the mixing and the timing- the breaks and build ups were too short compared to the drops. Keep improving! :D