This track really fits more for game..

I feel like this track could maybe have a bit more percussive elements introduced. That way it keeps the listener more interested. Now it sounds a bit like a loop rather than a 1-minute track.
Maybe some more background elements introduced halfway would be good.
I don't know the context, is it a soundtrack for a game? What kind of game? Is it meant to be level-music or menu-music? It might work very well in it's context, but on it's own it lacks a bit of extra stuff.

The main elements are pretty good. The drums are punchy enough and the pulsating bass-line works well with it.