Hmm, I suggest you to replace that electric guitar with something else, because it seems very muddy and seems to mess the whole mix up, especially at the beginning. Those drums seem to be very lacking, maybe you can make it stand out in the mix a bit? I would also suggest you to add some dynamics to your song, like adjusting the velocity, to make it sound more realistic, and also try to lower the reeverb on the piano a bit? Because it feels a bit muddy at the beginning. Overall, I see what you were trying to do, experimenting and all that, but I think that was a bit poorly executed in my perspective.