sounds like you're using nexus ;) The plucky bass supports the melody well but I think you need to distort or crush or design your sound more, to give it more of yourself. IMO sound design really matters here. That reverby kick you have, I feel like it doesn't fit. And you should play more with your hihats, change the volume and pan so it fills the room :). But overall the track didn't have any dissonances so you're good on that:P keep at it, good luck :)