Sweet
I absolutely love the darker/sad/angry type of songs, and this song is right down my alley >:}
There are some pauses in the keys, but then again you are playing this live, and that earns a lot of respect points from me.
I liked the slow down, little flutter of notes before jumping back into it more aggressively. The strings that accompany the piano, though repetitive, helps a good deal.
The song morphs ever so slowly into a happy feel, and then back into a darker core. A very interesting morph.
The song itself doesn't move around too much. My favorite part i'd say is the staccato bursts of strings and lower end piano while that treble segment plays again and again, and then slow down, you increase the octave of the repetetive segment, and introduce much fiercer, much more powerful strings.
Nice.
You play quite well, though again I would have liked to hear some more support instruments. I am a firm believer that chords give a song a lot of power if used properly, as well as an arsenal of different instruments.
The ending was abrupt, but acceptably so.
Good stuff again jdh504, keep up the good fight and keep em coming!