Music here is interesting, but I can't really hear the conversations going on. That could be mixed louder probably.

3:21 the FX on the vocals are interesting but probably be side-chained over the rest of the music. At points it would be ear-rapey if it were louder.

Century sounds almost like vaporwave, but faster, haha. Interesting!

9:39 I'd like something other than stock-y piano sounds. This theme kinda middles throughout, not really developing a lot but having a sort of interesting sound to it.

12:04, I'm wondering what you're going to do with that... clarinet synth? It's an interesting theme for sure, sounds super lo-fi, which may or may not be a plus. Over time I find myself wanting to hear less of those quarter notes. They sound all the same velocity. A hard-soft-hard-soft approach might help. Tune itself is pretty sweet, even if it feels like it progresses very slowly.

16:21 is actually pretty cool despite stuttering delivery. I'd sample it.

17:49, cool 80's inspired theme going on here. Wanna hear more of your vocals as opposed to the FX on the bass. Could maybe use a bit less keys. Genuinely interesting song. Vocals would sound great if they weren't so dry, as well.

22:44 Nicely written semi-free verse. I would also sample this. Delivery isn't too bad but needs a bit more attention to diction/intensity. Not bad!