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I Wont Smile For You

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I enjoy listening to synth, especially cinematic type of synth. It has such a heavy eerie vibe to it that I wanted to have my own take on it.

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The beginning was pretty good, but man, you need to work on those drums, the kick and hihat are too loud imo and the snare is too quiet. When making synthwave, snare needs to hit hard and have attitude :D. @2:00, hell yea, sounds real nice but still repetitive, change some notes out so your tracks have more progression. Nicely done, but could be better. Keep at it and you'll get good :)

BusanBlack responds:

Hey Geomeetria, first of all, thank you very much for your constructive criticism. I really appreciate it since I jumped into this track with a melody in my mind but still as a growing musician not fulling knowing how to make my sound feel full of life. I totally get where you're coming from with the repetitiveness of the tune. I need to work on note progression and figuring out how to advance it all to a new level. After listening to it again while reading your review I really did notice the hi-hat was really overpowering.

I'll keep all of this in mind when producing my next track, synthwave or other. Much love from one musician to another. Thank you.

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4.07 / 5.00

Jun 26, 2018
6:47 PM EDT
File Info
8.9 MB
3 min 54 sec

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