Very nice

So you have some pretty good work on the portal here glad I have found some of your work and this was a very good piece I do wish this particular piece was a tad bit longer it's a nice piece though and this is one that needs more intense moments like spikes of intense sound something like that but anyways really nice work once again I look forward to much more from you in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above

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this would be great to hear on a nime during a death scene