hmmmmm
i think that the main melody and stuff sounds sweet and the bassline is great. i think, however, that the melodies dont have enuf low frequencies to sound powerful and the bassline should serve as a more supporting aspect of the track rather than stand out more than the melody did because the melody sounded too weak to stand on its own and the bassline was comparatively louder. Also, the drum patters could be more "active" if you know what i mean, and throughout the piece you were getting some audio clipping. but as an incomplete track, this isnt too bad. i still think the melody sounds uber cool! gj!
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check my stuff pretty plz! save my new good track from the evil blammer!