The harmony is actually pretty good on this one!
But, there is only around 1 minute of "song" here, and a lot of transitions/buildups: the fact that the intro lasted almost 3 minutes and 10 seconds....
overall, good job :)
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This is one of the most time-consuming songs i've ever made. I'm glad I was finally able to finish it though.
(It has been 2 years, yet every single time I post one of my songs on here I still have a mental breakdown. Why can't I just put "electronic"? What's "New Wave"? What's "Synthwave"? What if it changes? AAAAAAAAAAAAA Also If you are wondering why I tagged it as industrial and you're listening to the beginning part of the song, wait until like 2:36, I swear it gets better)
Nice try I guess, you could try relaxing the sounds a bit it sounds a little distorted, maybe consume more time mixing it rather than putting more and more stuff, to learn to create some cool stuff start doing little instruments and cleaner sound rather than many instruments and distorted stuff. Lots of variety and effort on the harmony though, well played, Followed and 5/5, I am awaiting more from you!
Packtion responds:
You're 100% correct in saying that I need to work on mixing. I'm currently looking for a well-balanced headset, which is a lot harder than it looks because 95% of the time it has "- BASS BOOSTED FOR EXTRA ENJOYMENT" as a feature.
A lot of my music uses a lot of distorted instruments, but I don't think a lot of them clashed well in this song. Particularly the NES instrument one, that uses a slightly different "temperament" than the other ones.
This song used to just be 4:04 - 5:54 and I wanted a build up to it. Then it ended up being 6 minutes long. I'm glad you liked it though, and thanks for following me!
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