in 0:00 to 0:12 the piano part is too loud. Try making it less loud, like the piano in 0:13 to 0:26.
The drop at 0:41 is too sudden. It does not feel at all like a drop.
everything from 0:55 to 1:29 feels like a random add-on to the music and seems to have nothing to do with the music before it.
Other than these three things, the music is great! Can't wait for the finished version (ik you didn't ask, but you should call it 'Energetic')

so HOT !!! I love your stuff <3

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