Could be longre

So first off this is actually notbad at all, its way too "SHORT" so if you added more drums and maybe even other sounds with more mixture it would be ok, but more sounds for sure this was notbad and has potential, so keep at it and ad more depth of sure its a good start though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
if you added more drums and maybe even other sounds with more mixture it would be ok

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no offence but am i hearing some one bang on some trash cans out side?