eh its alright
If your gonna have the balls to call this Hip Hop then you should make me want to pump it up. Right now I ain't got that feeling. Its too bland and subdued. I could hear some phat lyrics in my head to this, if you would just put some in there that scream out at the listener then it would be better. At one point I could even hear this being a breakin type of song but you pulled away from that. It seems like you just put song out before they are finished. You could do better I am sure.
I luvd dis one... awesome main melody, very well composed... excellent work, but work on mastering lil bit... that beats in it have to explode into my ears...