I really like the beginning.
The rest of the song is just sort of this generic synth though, you know?
piano with some synths
I really like the beginning.
The rest of the song is just sort of this generic synth though, you know?
I like the bouncy piano at the beginning, but the echo effect on it really makes it hard to follow the rhythm at the beginning. The dreamy pads at :05 were nice, but they sound like a generic Nexus preset. Also, the intricate rhythm of the underlying riff at :16 kinda clashes with the dreamy pads. Seems to me like you could stand to flesh out some of these ideas a little more. If you're going to try to make :16 work, I'd suggest at least layering some drums on top there to keep the rhythm a bit more grounded. Intro could use some toning down of the echoing, but otherwise I like the ascending arpeggios. Hope you keep working on this, man! It has potential.
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