Pros: I like the melody and everything mixes it could become a great song if you work some more on it. That's why you should listen to the cons
Cons: Can be a little to repetitive at some parts, but honestly, that's not that big of a deal. THIS IS WAY TOO QUIET FOR SOME REASON, so please try and see if you can do anything about that.
Very unique song. Keep up the good work and if possible, try and fix it up from time to time to make it a great song, Please fix the volume thing.