it called:Oh god my beans!
i have a titel for the song: batizado
Is this the one you showed me a while ago?
Yeah, this is the one. I pretty much gave the review to you in chat but I can still say a few thins that I did and didn't like here.
Technically, there are no clashing notes, but there are still some awkward notes played by the lead. Let's chat sometime, I can help you redo that melody.
The transition in the beginning of the song - where the percussion temporarily goes away - that's nice. :D Put a little more effort into that and it's good.
You try to put effort into making your melody diverse, but keeping one synth diverse won't hold the entire song from being boring. And then your lead is slightly underpowered, I think. Make it just a little louder and, again, chat with me and I can work with you on that.
Melody aside, your harmonies are great. I like your synth choice with the arp and bass synth. Again, though, you might want to work on diversity...
Percussion... well, they're original samples but I don't like them. It sounds like you used them raw, without FX or anything. Come on, is that as original as you are? >:(
Not much else to say. It needs work but could potentially be pretty good. :) Next time we chat I'll help you with it, if that's what you want. Looking forward to it...
Yeah, I could have used some effects on the percussion, but I couldn't find anything that went well with it. LoL.
Thanks as usual for the great review.