I hate the opening but liked some of the other random sounds. i'll give it a four, practice makes perfect :)
Good Qual Sample - but no beat
You seem to have talent in finding different sounds - and patterns - unfortunately this song is really lacking in umph - it just does not have a catchy beat - also at one point your flanging hi pitch sample is out of key with the main beat.
I'm sure you can do better. Just keep jamming!
not horrible.. but kind of bland, some cool basslines, but the sample in the beginning is so out of place... stick with it youll get better
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.