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RaFii - Blue Sky (original mix)

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A song inspired on Tobu music
note: this song is an original mix, not a coied song or something else


it is here...
https://soundcloud.com/user-207402780/rafii-blue-sky-original-mix

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I can hear out many different music genres. I would consider this as EDM (electronic dance music). A House usually is a bit more relaxing and not that 'progressive'.

The song is very uplifting indeedly, I definitely would dance to it!

Here are some tips/suggestions for you:
- you should optimize the kick and snare a bit. The kick is supressing the snare and it's barely hearable. A strong and powerful snare is a neat addition to dance music
- you should work with more variations. I figured after the half of the song, the exact same elements are repeating. For the further songs, you definitely should make some changes to the second drop/pre-drop and make the entire track more interesting.

I looked up at your age and you definitely deserve my respect! You remind me of myself when I was at your age. :)

DJR-18 responds:

thank you for responding! :-)
its a great opportunity to get a feedback from a good musician!
thanks for the tip ;-)....but i can't edit the song because I'm using a demo version of FL studio...badly i can't edit it ;-(... but anyway I am working on a new track and I will apply the tips you said for me on it :-)...
thank you very much for your tips:-)...BTW how can I thank you...:-)
sorry if i repeated the song...i am working on a new track and then I will spend many time for it....this feedback of yours is very helpful...I will put a stronger snare because i forgot to put the snare on the mixer LoL.....thank you very much..hope i will be like you at your age....and if i will have a job... i will buy some tools needed for making music because i just use laptop and broken headphones for this ;-).....thank you very much...you pushed me to make more music....and also you deserve my support for you;-)

and btw i am studying and busy to school...i will also study about dubstep music:-)

advance happy easter.......

GOOD MORNING FROM THE PHILIPPINES ;-)))))))

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Score
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Uploaded
Mar 13, 2018
9:25 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
9.6 MB
4 min 12 sec

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