I found your BBS post titled "Audio Joint" and thought I would give your songs a listen.
Well this song takes a strong ear to listen to. It started nicly with clouds in mind, the 'sky view' synths. It seems like a rough draft though, like a combination of ideas not collaborated together. I would just start getting into the song and it would cut out..Really odd addition to the song. There was alot of scratching I believe from too much treble(?). possibly my speakers. The 1/8 beat synth was great. This track would really benefit by taking out those pauses and work out a merge. Find a way to get rid of that scratching...It really makes it sound like crud. Maybe drums?
Like I said, it started sreat, I really liked the sounds, but it sounds like a rough draft.
Keep at it man!
By the way...I'm interested in joining the 'A Audio Critics Crew.' It sounds really great... Take a listen to some of my tunes.. See what you think! =)
I enjoyed it, Even though im not much of a techno guy, I thought it was pretty diverse although kinda slow and with a confusing pause in it. I do think its catchy, you should try getting someone who plays guitar to add in some chords or something. Drums could have helped but my favorite part was around 1.45 when the piano kicked in Cool audio DOOD Later!
Very smooth audio tracks.. i like them.
Very well done, I like it very much, it sounds like you put a lot of time into this one. I don't know what program you used, it doesn't sound like fruity loops.
Very well done, keep up the good work!