I found your BBS post titled "Audio Joint" and thought I would give your songs a listen.
Well this song takes a strong ear to listen to. It started nicly with clouds in mind, the 'sky view' synths. It seems like a rough draft though, like a combination of ideas not collaborated together. I would just start getting into the song and it would cut out..Really odd addition to the song. There was alot of scratching I believe from too much treble(?). possibly my speakers. The 1/8 beat synth was great. This track would really benefit by taking out those pauses and work out a merge. Find a way to get rid of that scratching...It really makes it sound like crud. Maybe drums?
Like I said, it started sreat, I really liked the sounds, but it sounds like a rough draft.
Keep at it man!
By the way...I'm interested in joining the 'A Audio Critics Crew.' It sounds really great... Take a listen to some of my tunes.. See what you think! =)