Sweet

Loved this song. Thought it went well with this game I was working on and played it while I worked. Ended up sounding better over time. Finally added it and I've been addicted to your stuff ever since. Great work man, really. Keep it up. :D

I dont know if you did but...

...did you use something called Prodj to make that, you may not of, but i recognised some of the riffs - that strings riff and some of the drum beats. Rather good. If you did use Prodj then there was alot of original material in there, good work! All my songs (except one) were made using Prodj's basic samples, lol, thats why they're pretty rubbish.

Well, industrial's a fun one...

I made one myself... did you review it? I'm not going to bother checking right now.

Stressed, huh? Well, this song makes it evident. Weak percussion in this introduction section and clashing notes left and right, as the melody's in a different key from the bassline, as well as quality being... ouch. This is exactly what I remember from the song last time, too, so it seems you didn't do too much to change it. Mind pointing out to me what you changed?

Looking at it like an Industrial song, it's actually pretty decent but is largely lacking in the bass area. Also, I don't like those hihats... I know a pretty good Industrial drums soundfont I can share with you...

Hmm... well, you've been saying it's really good but I think this could have gone a LOT farther. Better bass, better drums, etc... (Oh, and fix that string synth, too. XD) Keep trying.

hmm....

well the pieces didnt fit that much on this track
and i dont think its heavy enough to be industrial you need something like a bassline to link all the parts together
5'd coz im nice
TOMFITZ