This is my first. I need more practice of course, what ya' think?
It could use more layers.
If you actually made each individual track:
This was an interesting peice, i respect the fact you went through the trouble of creating the tracks, but this song needs a good base line. When it's all melody, it sounds hollow.
If you used premade tracks:
There is no point in just throwing premade trcks together, music is for those who give the effort to make thier own music.
~pennworks
good but random
I liked it but the whole thing was all random and stuff. Didn't really flow too much but it's still awesome for your first audio. Woo!
Yeah, I have to work on my transition and need to add a more 'flow-together' track. hopefully, my next one will be better. Thanks for the input.
cool
sweet.
I love this track.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Staxitix 
